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©2007-2009 ~Rayofdark
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From last nights shoot with Starr.

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:iconrayofdark:
Thanks!

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When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.

~Ansel Adams
:iconalannajohan:
This is probably my favourite from this series; her pose is at its most alluring, and facial expression at ease. The moment you've captured is right. If I were to critique, it would actually be on the background; I think it is a misdenomer that a plain background necessarilly puts beneficial emphasis on the model, especially when lighting is not quite perfect; I actually feel, in this case at least, it dulls the model slightly and that a plain, more natural background, would lend context to the pose. Just my thoughts, of course, and not to detract from the merit this image obviously does hold.

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:iconrayofdark:
Wow thank you so much. Yeah as far as studio goes my backdrops are limited as they are quite expensive. Im going to be doing some outdoor shots of her soon. Thank you so much for the critique and I will attempt to do something more with her later on so please when you see that picture revaluate it!

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When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.

~Ansel Adams
:iconalannajohan:
But of course - send me a note when you do ^^

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Divided Creativity:

Portraiture: ~AlannaJohan-Imagery

Words: ~AlannaJohan
:iconrayofdark:
I sure will.

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When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.

~Ansel Adams
:iconjonatin:
Would you or Starr mind if I attempted to use this as a reference piece for a Painter drawing? I like the offbeat pose, it works well with the outfit. I've got an idea I'd like to try with bumping up the contrast and changing the fill lighting to a more intense blue (moonlight through a window?). I can _almost_ see it if I >squint< at the picture.

Keep up the good work!
:iconrayofdark:
maybe I have to contact the model.

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When words become unclear, I shall focus with photographs. When images become inadequate, I shall be content with silence.

~Ansel Adams
:iconjonatin:
Hopefully she doesn't mind, I really liked this shot and wanted to draw it pretty badly, so here 'tis:

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Credited the reference and linked to this page.

Keep up the great work!

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